The Persuasive Essay, continued....

Everyone did a great job today editing and presenting their persuasive essays. We heard about gun control, health insurance, TV and young children, homeschooling, public schools, immigration law, credit for courses, mail advertising, and last but not least... the Mighty Newspaper.



Students who are still working on their essays should finish them this week and also do this week's assignment which is:
1. Write a persuasive cover letter for your dream job using the handout as your guideline. Think about your strong points and skills.
OR
2. Finish writing the second persuasive essay idea that you've already thought about.

This is due by WEDNESDAY at midnight on your blog.

Here is an example of #1:
MY DREAM JOB:  WORKING AT STARBUCKS

Dear Hiring Manager,
I am the ideal candidate for this position.  I have over 2 years of experience working at coffee shops, and I am enthusiastic about work. For example, I always greet customers by name, and am cheerful with my coworkers. I make a point of asking people how they are, and take time to listen to their answers. I look at regular customers as friends and new customers as potential friends. I love working with people, and if there is a customer complaint I am able to handle it quickly by remaking their order with a smile.

I am also  an extremely hard worker.  I don't mind filling in when someone is late, and can handle various tasks such as making coffee while taking orders if necessary. I always wash the dishes and wipe all the counters in between waiting on customers.  I also restock necessary supplies so that when we have a rush we are able to efficiently take care of customers.

I am self motivated:  I always keep my eye on the conditions of the shop, and make sure the trash is emptied and tables cleaned off.  I look at the business as an extension of my self. When things are slow I use the time to make signs and sweep the floor.  I have received the "Employee of the Month" award two times.

Working at Starbucks would fullfill my dream of working in the best coffee shop in the world.  I hope very much to have a chance to meet you in person to discuss this soon.

Sincerely,
Mocha Smith

Here are some grammar exercises that might be useful this week:
phrasal verbs

Does this need "the"?  Remember: “a” for one of many; “the” for the one and only, and nothing for general. 

a or an?


relative pronouns

Also, take a look at this website, which Victoria discovered:
Pros and Cons of Controversial Issues
It has lots of current issues and the arguments people use to discuss them.

GOOD LUCK!